Hey !! Meinei Kleine Schwester hatt gerade eine FanFiction geschrieben bzw. ist gerdade dabei.. und sie hatt mir den ersten teil zum lesen und Korriegieren gegeben !! Ich bin aber nicht gut in Englisch !! Darum brauche ich jemanden der mir das korriegiert !!!! Bitte!! Ich suche auch jemanden der mir dann helfen würde die anderen teile zu korriegieren ...es ist ihr soo wichtig !!! So hier isr mal der 1. Teil ihrer Harry Potter FanFiction !! Fragt mich nicht worum es darin geht ;-D It was late in the night when Harry climbed up the stairs to the astronomie tower … “Who is there ?” , a voice from a dark corner asked . “Hermione ? Are you there ?” Harry answeard. “Harry? What are you doing up here ?” I think it´s better if you answear that first ! We have been looking for you everywhere but after the supper you dissapeard !!, Harry replied with a bit of anger in his voice .”Oh ...I´m so sorry ..it´s just...tonight is a shooting star night ..and I´ve come here to see it “ , she said. “Why have not been telling us that , may we want to see it too!!” “I thought you and Ron are not intersted in such childish things !! “ “I would like to see it !!”, Harry said and it was this Moment he realised that he was alone with Hermione for the first Time after ..it mihgt have been a year . “Really?You want to see it ?It starts every second !! Come here ..sit down..uhmm..Just if you want I mean” , she said suprised and excited . Harry walked over to her and sat down next to her . “We have to open the window or we won´t see it “ They opend the window and looked outside it was such a beautiful night . The stars were shining and the Moon was reflected in the clear lake. “Wow I never imagend that it´s so cold tonight,I should have take a jacket with me”,Hermione said looking froozen. Harry moved closer to her and moved his arm around her shoulders.”Better ?”,he asked. “Never been better” They were looking in eachothers eyes and there was a moment..they moved closer and then..shooting stars everywehre the sky was lighted up with the clear and ghosty light they brought with them .”Isn´t that beautiful ?”, Hermione asked excited . “No it isn´t !!”, Harry said cold. Hermione looked shocked .”Hmm..I know you wouldnt like it!!” ,she said disapointed. “I can not see how beautiful the shooting satrs are when the greates and beuatifulst shooting star is leaning here on me”,he replied . “Harry..what does that mean?” “I know you are with Ron but now that I´m so close to you ..here in this situation ...I can´t stand it anymore..I´ve been hiding my feelings for so long ..but..I just...” but he wasn´t able to finish the sentence because Hermione was leaning forward him and kissed him with such a power that he couldn´t breave anymore,when they broke the kiss Harry finished : “What I wanted to say was : I love you Hermione!!” “Oh Harry , you have no idea for how long I´ve been dreaming of that....” “Not longer than me I guess” They both laughed.. “ I love you too Harry” “But what about Ron ? I thought..” , he asked again not really beliving what she just said. “There is nothing with Ron..maybe he has feeling for me ..and it hurts me a lot that..I have to hurt him..but there is only one man I love since I first meet him and this are : YOU!!” “I love you Hermione”,Harry replied. “I know”,she said with a big grin. Then Harry moved closer to her and kissed her again ..everything was fine..for the first time in his life he feelt really lucky..he was here..with Hermione in his arms..he wasn´t carring about Voldemort.. with Hermione on his side..he will be happy..for ever. It was for both the happiest moment ever.They where finally holding and kissing each other while the Shooting Stars where falling on the Earth.